eh it was aight

beat is alright

cant understand half of what you say

ur timing is not too catchy...

its not funny its more like a more depressing version of eminem...

uh.... thats about it...

It starts out clean, but

as i was saying it was good at begining, but had too much of that remixing thing... less of that would make this song better

other than that it was alright.... i hate it when people give 0 without any constructive criticism... i gave a 3 but it is more like a 2.5...

actually quite good for the score

only around forty seconds does it start to throw you offf.... needs more of a main developing progressive type of chorus... other than that... you have bass down and you have the drums down.... just get a little more of a catchy full tune as the main beet and you will be aight... i was definatly diggin it untill 40 seconds...